....Sorry....><''

I was just not in the best of moods to be on DA for a long time. So, when I signed back on last night...0.0....wow..i had like over 400 things to look at....>//<;

Any who, I have been writing this story...its an original, too. I hope you will forgive and forget.

^0^ I also have just gotten a tablet too!! its so kewl, and I will be posting up this heart i drew...my friends think its really good, and i made some things with it...

wow, its been forever sence i wrote a journal. I've been lazy lately....like Shikamaur. im just bored and lazy....-sigh- im finaly getting my life bac tegether.

Guy:"Can we have sex now."

Girl: "Can we do what? I thought we were going to the movies"

Guy: "Nah, i wanna be your first, finally."

Girl: "Um...no.Uh, just keep driving, were gonna miss the movie"

Guy: "Who cares? im more important then the movie"

Girl: "but you have a girlfriend, who happens to be my friend......."

Guy: "So, if you don't tell, I won't tell."

Girl: "Besides that, I'm waiting for someone special. Someone that I want to be with for the rest of my life to be my first."

Guy: "I'm not special to you?"

Girl: "You're my friend. That's all."

Guy: looks forward and keeps driving.


5 minutes pass.......

Guy: starts to run his hand up the girl's thigh, getting close to where he shouldnt be.

Girl: moves his hand, "Don't touch me.".

Guy: tries to kiss her.

Girl: screams, "Would you stop."

Guy: continues trying.

Girl: moves to the back seat

Guy: parks on an abandoned street and gets in the backseat with the girl. Starts to kiss her and shoves his hand up her shirt, feeling her.

Girl: pushes him off and scoots over, "Please, don't do this. Thats horrible, you pig."

Guy: "Shut up, I know you want it, I can see it in your eyes." Moves over to her and starts to unbutton her pants aggressively.

Girl: pushes him harder and says, "No, don't!"

Guy: getting aggravated, punches her.

Guy: "Come on, i wanna get in your pants, and i know you wanna see whats in mine."

Girl: crying, continues to fight.

Guy: punches her harder, pulls her pants off, and holds her down.

Girl: trys to get away as he takes off his boxers, but he was to strong.
screams as he shoves himself inside of her, "NO STOP, DONT DO THIS!!"

Guy: as he groans, she screams, so he puts his hand over her mouth. groaning continues from the guy as three hours pass...

Girl: terrified, and still struggling, watches and feels the guy go in and out of her. he pushes inside hard, almost hurting her.

Guy: pulls out of her, wipes himself, and puts pants back on.

Girl: sits on the corner of the seat, crying.

Guy: "wait, i was being a jerk... i didnt ask if you wanted more."

Guy: he laughs in a sick, twisted way.


Girl: "i swear i will get your ass in jail if-"

Guy: looks at her, then comes closer. "Tell the cops, or anyone, i will kill you.
and thats a promise"

Girl: pulls back, "Just take me home, now."

Guy: he says "alright, right after this. just for threatning to tell the cops on me, ima teach you a lesson that youll love."

The guy does the same thing he just did for an hour.

Guy: "fun wasnt it?"

Guy: drives her home. she steps out of the car, angry, scared, and helpless.

Guy: acting like everything went okay and they had fun, he yells out the window "good night baby, see you later."

Girls parents: How was the movie sweetie ?

the girl just looks at them, and goes up to her room.

2 months later.........

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Girl: "Doctor, what's wrong with me. I haven't had my time of the month in 2 months"

Doctor: looks at her, "You haven't been having your period for a reason."

Girl: looks at him and says, "Why?" dreading the answer that she was sure to receive.

Doctor: "You are pregnant."

Girl: breaks down crying, looking at her belly.

When the girl gets back to school, the story gets out that shes pregnant....

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Guy: "If you lie to anyone and say that i raped, i swear i will beat you so hard, i would kill you and that baby"

Girl: "but you DID rape me. you groaned, while i screamed. you didnt care about my feelings. you made me have sex with you."

Guy: "so? why does it matter? you liked it anyways so shut up, stupid slut."

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Girls, if this story touched you, repost it as "this guy is an asshole"

Guys, if this story pisses you off, repost it as "I'll kill any guy who does this to my girl or any girl"

If you're against rape, please take the time to repost this.
don't overlook it

i was posting my stories on fanfiction and some person just left me a REALLY mean flame. and i saw on there profile that they NEVER wrote a story. and her username could not be and more mean, it was.......i flame SUCKY stories. this is was she left me.





yes, you read my name right. now you know what i think of this.

1. i detest authors who make mary sues out of their main character. i also
detest authors who put secondary characters just to bash them. but if there's
one thing i abhor more than those two, it's the authors who make mary sues out
of their main characters AND put secondary characters just to bash them.

2. your characters say and do a lot of unnecessary things, which just makes
the plot very senseless.

3. that's beside the point that i don't think this story even has a plot.

4. many word processing programs out there have spelling and grammar check
features. make the most out of technology.

5. the 'ask/state' thing you keep on repeating is very annoying. sure,
characters can ask questions that are more of statements, but do they have to
do it again and again and again? you're the only one shallow enough to get
amused by that.

6. slow down with the begging. it makes you sound more pathetic that you
really are. not to mention that you started off very pathetic already.

oh, well, i'm glad to have reviewed a precious comment to your fic. i'm just
so sorry that it's a flame and it's signed.




HEY!! I NEED FEED BACK! i am so not really, well....the word im looking 4, i cant find it. its just that i might NEVER write ever again.

OMG! I finally got my story up! i always wanted 2 get 2 posting it, but on here i can't, it wont let me, so i posted it on fanfiction, heres the link!

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It my frist eva story i wrote, not, i was writing a different stroy, then...well..stoped, but i posted this one thought. PLZ!!!PLZ!!! PLZ!!! READ!! TY!!